Angle Moxie Abridged?

[A88mph]

I personaly want to make an abriged series, but realise I do not have the tools to abridge any anime. But one day, after reading Angle Moxie for the 3ed time I thought "Maybe it would be a cool idea to abridge Angle Moxie" since i have the tools to do so.

Now before you tell me something like "No, don't do it! You will only ruin it!" Think about it. If this got Abridged, I can do the following:

1.)Create one of the first Abridged Manga on the net.
2.)Add sound Effects to add realism to the Comic. And most importantly
3.)Advertise Venisproductions by creating curiosity in Youtubers, And thay will come to the site in sertch of the original work.

So, should i do it?

[gundamzuki]

I'd say 'go ahead, the worst you could do is get it ignored'. But ultimately this is Dan's stuff so he'd have final say in everything.

[edcool1]

I agree with what gundam said. It couldn't hurt...but of course, dan has final word.

[A88mph]

I agree with what gundam said. It couldn't hurt...but of course, dan has final word.

That is exactly why I posted this topic before starting. (all i have is the panals for pages 1-16 on my flash drive. Enough to make episode 1.)

hope Dan replies soon.

[Dan]

I'm not exactly sure what this all means. Examples?
-Dan!

[A88mph]

I'm not exactly sure what this all means. Examples?
-Dan!

Had a feeling you would ask that, so Ill try to explane

Imagine the first panle of page 1 (the one that sais up top "It all starts with a dream"). now take away all the text on that panal. That is all the people would see on this and every other panle (thus, they will come here for the original work).
Now, to show when they a person is talking, the speech bubble would be white, and the others would be filled grey.

Here is what I have planed for page 1's comic panles

Panle 1
Alex: (In a Valley-Girl like voice) So like, I know that this is Heven, so like, wheres the mall, and like, wheres the spa. can you like, tell me where they are?

Panle 2
Hooded man: Look girl, My names is charly, and you have been selected to be one of my angles
Alex: A Charly Angle?

Panle 3
Hooded Man: With this wand, you will be fighting (Picture of demon ritual) the forces of Satin, (Flag of North Korea) Keep North Korea from being a bad boy, (Smbole of Sciantology) Destroy the Church of Sciantology, (Back to panle 3) you get the idea.

Panle 4
(Alex just stares at the wand in her hand)

Panle 1
Alax: So like wheres the mall?
Hooded Man: sigh


If this made no sence, (since I have a hard time explaining things) Ill make the first episode, and Somehow get it to you Dan.

[Bekul]

Oh, so, like - a satire of it?

[Celey_the_Ego]

That's what an abridged version means...

And... uhh.... It'd probably be a lot funnier if you could actually read what you put in the panels...

Parody, spoof... Whatever you wanna call it...

[A88mph]

If I did that, then it would be a scilent film, and that would be boring

But I could use some ideas for charictor personalities

example, I plan to make Alex a Vally girl.
And Tsutsumu paroty Mike Tyson. (or maybe selvester stalone.)

Still waiting for Dans ok though. Won't start production without it.

[gundamzuki]

Might I suggest that you do some preliminary work and post it for review? Nothing too serious, but something for us to get a better idea of where you're going with this.

[edcool1]

Or find an example of something someone else has done that's similar.

[A88mph]

For an Idea on what I plan to do with this, try googleing "Yu-Gi-Oh! the Abridged series"

And like I said before, once I get Dans OK, I'll make Episode 1 (Porbably with words in bubble since i do not own a computer mic. yet) and send it to him (If someone could PM me with instructions on how to do that.)

[Maelstrom]

I think you should produce a sample of what you are trying to do. Don't just give ideas; present something that you consider "finished" work, getting rid of any problems or errors. If you are looking for Dan's approval, you can help your cause by

(1) demonstrating you can produce good work
(2) showing that the direction of your work is something Dan can go along with

[A88mph]

I think you should produce a sample of what you are trying to do. Don't just give ideas; present something that you consider "finished" work, getting rid of any problems or errors. If you are looking for Dan's approval, you can help your cause by

(1) demonstrating you can produce good work
(2) showing that the direction of your work is something Dan can go along with

on that note I have found a computer mic and am ready to start recording voices (as of time of this post).

But how do i get the finished work to Dan?

[Dan]

Email? If that doesn't work, a large-file storage service like dilbertfiles.com should.
-Dan!